fall_silent ([info]fall_silent) wrote,

SUUUPEER EMO. HOLLAAAAAA

less than obvious were words you spoke at sundown
less than meaningful was my response
less than perfect was the semi-awkward motion to leave
but all my thoughts collect into that parting glance
you're tripping over telephones
cross your eyes
there is two of me
wherever you go
hope to... lie
awake, goodnight.

intricately close the butterflies, so they
can't make a desperate escape
when all our longings for one another's timid sighs
turn our ears into parades
you're stumbling into harder walls
hold your tongue
everything you say
can and will be held against you
like i wish i would be.

close the gates,
close the gates
burn them down
they're not as perfect
as you'd like them to be
read my words,
and fall away
close me out
we're not so destined
as led to believe.
you're holding on to memories
try not to explain
there is one of us
walking away
the city lights will show
there's nothing left, of me.

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[info]_dearjohn

July 19 2005, 22:36:44 UTC 6 years ago

i got more out of it HERE than on IM.

[info]fall_silent

July 19 2005, 22:38:25 UTC 6 years ago

IM GLAD. DID YOU CRY AS MUCH AS I DD WRITIGN IT>

SEE IT BORKE MY KEBOATD TO ALL CAPS> HAHA WHO CALLS IT ALL CAPS STILL> ITS OBVIOSULY CAPS LOCK SILLYS

[info]_dearjohn

July 19 2005, 22:50:34 UTC 6 years ago

OBVIOUSLY SINCE YOUR PERIODS ARE>

[info]deadpoetrise

July 19 2005, 22:51:19 UTC 6 years ago

LOL SHUT UP>?

[info]_dearjohn

July 20 2005, 03:57:32 UTC 6 years ago

WTF NO THNX.

[info]mexico_bound

July 20 2005, 05:55:01 UTC 6 years ago

ian i am jealous of your poetry-writing skillz. always. every time.


but not so much of your nail-gun skillz. nope, not so much.

[info]mexico_bound

July 20 2005, 05:55:53 UTC 6 years ago

um. do people still spell skills with a z? ...if not, then obviously i was bringing it back. duh.

[info]deadpoetrise

July 20 2005, 07:10:57 UTC 6 years ago

lolz true. thx.

i think people still say skillz./ at least kewl ones.

[info]mexico_bound

July 20 2005, 21:00:52 UTC 6 years ago

hurrah!
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